Search from various angielski teachers...
Linda kids/adults
Self-help Traveling
More and more people select self-help traveling. But the phenomenon will bring advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, it is revealed that a lot of people think this way could have fun with friends. Where there is self-help traveling, there is happiness. Secondly, it is a very cheap trip for students and going shopping with friends. But every coin has two sides. First and foremost, their parents worry about their kids' safety on a trip. Funthermore. I think that students don't assure themselves of their safety in a hotel. Last but not least, I deemed that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Self-help traveling can exercise a student’s independence.
will
As long as we focus on the bad, we have an unforgettable trip. Only in this way can we have a bright and promising future.
7 kwi 2022 10:43
Poprawki · 2
Self-help Traveling
More and more people select self-help traveling. But the phenomenon will bring advantages and disadvantages.
First of all, it is revealed that a lot of people think this way could have fun with friends. Where there is self-help traveling, there is happiness. Secondly, it is a very cheap trip for students and going shopping with friends. But every coin has two sides. First and foremost, their parents worry about their kids' safety on a trip. Funthermore. I think that students don't assure themselves of their safety in a hotel. Last but not least, I deemed that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Self-help traveling can exercise a student’s independence.
will
As long as we focus on the bad, we have an unforgettable trip. Only in this way can we have a bright and promising future.
Hi Linda
I would really like to know what "Self-help travelling" is. Does it mean "self-guided" or independent travel? I have never heard of it. It is difficult to correct your text without knowing what it means.
Victoria
7 kwietnia 2022
Self-help Traveling More and more people are choosing self-help traveling. However, this
phenomenon has advantages and disadvantages. First of all, it is revealed
that a lot of people think that travelling this way means they will have more fun with friends. Where there is
self-help traveling, there is happiness. Secondly, it is a very cheap trip for
students and going shopping with friends. But there are two sides to every coin. First
and foremost, their parents worry about their kids' safety on a trip.
Furthermore. I think that students can't be assured of their safety in a
hotel. In conclusion, I believe that the advantages outweigh the
disadvantages. Self-help traveling can exercise a student’s independence.
As long as we focus on the good things, we will have an unforgettable trip. Only in this way
can we have a bright and promising future.
I would call this 'independent travelling'.
7 kwietnia 2022
Chcesz robić postępy szybciej?
Dołącz do społeczności uczących się i wypróbuj darmowe ćwiczenia!
Linda kids/adults
Znajomość języków
białoruski, chiński (mandaryński), angielski, japoński, koreański
Język do nauczenia się
angielski
Artykuły, które również mogą ci się spodobać

Santa, St. Nicholas, or Father Christmas? How Christmas Varies Across English-Speaking Countries
3 głosy poparcia · 0 Komentarze

Reflecting on Your Progress: Year-End Language Journal Prompts
2 głosy poparcia · 1 Komentarze

Same Word, Different Meaning: American, British, and South African English
25 głosy poparcia · 17 Komentarze
Więcej artykułów
