Hi
Would you tell which one of these sentences is more advisable to write a very well-formed, understandable article?
1- Seeking ways TO rethink our development and TO use technology to protect the planet against further environmental damage.
2- Seeking ways TO rethink our development and USE technology to protect the planet against further environmental damage.
Honestly, I don't like either choice. I would write:
We are rethinking our development and seeking ways to use technology to protect the planet against further environmental damage.
4 marca 2021
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I like 2 better. 1 has too many TOs. BTW, those are not actually sentences. They are clauses. They never say who is seeking.
5 marca 2021
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