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I'm going to see my high school friends tomorrow after a long time. We were belong to dance club, and we live close to each other, so we used to go home together. I love them, so I'm really grad to see them.
5 cze 2025 23:10
Poprawki · 1
I’m going to see my high school friends tomorrow — it’s been a long time! We used to belong to the dance club, and we lived close to each other, so we often went home together. I love them, so I’m really glad I’ll get to see them again.
“It’s been a long time” → More natural than “after a long time” in this context. • “Used to belong to” → “Used to” sounds more natural and clearly shows it’s in the past. • “We often went home together” → Adding “often” gives a more fluent and friendly tone. • “I’ll get to see them again” → More natural way to express future intention with excitement.
6 cze 2025 09:01
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