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Дмитрий
I wrote an essay leading IELTS standard. Could you help and indicate my mistakes if they are?
It is considered that government is supposed to provide people by a basic income even though they do not have any job. I absolutely agree with this opinion and believe that it is a right policy course.
First of all, I think that It makes people much more confident and secure. It is often the case when an individual lost their job or cannot find an appropriate one. In this case scenario, a basic income is significant to help people to get by while looking for work. For instance, during coronavirus-2019, a large number of people
lost their job unexpectedly and government payments helped people to buy essentials like food and rents. That is why it is important to have the opportunity to get a basic income.
Furthermore, a universal income allows human-beings to seek better jobs, get further education or start a business. In other words, there is no need to be afraid of financial status or possibility to lose the income and left without money. For example, researches in Finland in 2018 has shown that participants who received unconditional payments were more likely to engage in entrepreneurial activities and hobbies compared to those who does not have such support. In addition to that, people potentially monetize their interests due to lack of financial stress. Thus, a basic income ensures financial stability during uncertain times, allowing individuals to concentrate on looking for a new job without the added stress of financial insecurity.
To sum up, I firmly believe that a basic income is rational policy because it makes people assertive and focused on finding better job.
1 lut 2025 08:49
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Hi Дмитрий. If you put this in the exercises section, people can correct it directly. In this section, we can only list things, as David has done below.
1 lut 2025 18:31
I am not a teacher.
But here are a few suggestions which will hopefully help you.
provide people with a basic income
it is the right policy. Or it is the right course of action (sounds old-fashioned to me though).
I think that it (lower case i) makes
when an individual loses their job / has lost their job
buy food and pay (their) rent.
human beings (two words)
the possibility of losing your income or being left without any money.
...research in Finland (research in this context means one or more studies)
research in Finland in 2018 showed that
compared to those who do not have such support
Good luck with your IELTs studies.
1 lut 2025 10:42
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Дмитрий
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angielski, rosyjski
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angielski
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