He taught me that i am my best company, He invited me to put all in his site. And throw away all that i didn’t need it i had a Lot of acumulate After so many insomnia and days to catharsis after co

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Gabriela

He taught me that i am my best company, He invited me to put all in his site. And throw away all that i didn’t need it i had a Lot of acumulate After so many insomnia and days to catharsis after conecting and desconecting Little by little i began to enjoy of his company Please help me 🙏🏽

24 lut 2021 18:14

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He taught me that I am my own best company, and He invited me to put all trust in His sight. And, to throw away everything that I didn’t truly need--I had accumulated a lot. After so much insomnia and days of catharsis in which I emotionally connected and disconnected, little by little, I finally began to enjoy His company.

Hi Gabriela. I honestly have no idea what you were trying to express, but given the use of “He” in the middle of the sentence, I interpreted that as a reference to God, which is why I capitalized the word “his” later on. It that was not your intent, both of those words should not be capitalized unless they start a sentence. Similarly, when you use the letter “i” in reference to yourself, it is always capitalized as I have done here and above. I hope that this helps you.

25 lutego 2021

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