That was very good, just need to keep practising and to read out aloud more often to gain more confidence. There were a few places where I suspect that because of nerves and a little lack of confidence the endings of a few words and sentences, were a little silent whilst you needed a little time to think. You will be so much better in a very short time. I am confident of that. Keep up the good work. I had no problem understanding every word you spoke.

A few pronunciation issues as the other person said. But the good news is it's not too bad and it's still easy enough to understand you. If you want any tips and tricks for improving your English please feel free to send me a direct message. I would love to help you any way that I can. 😊

I love a nice cup of tea! I understood your little discourse with no problem. My little feedback suggestion would be to practice forming sounds like the 'digraph' (th) sound. With English, digraphs (th), dipthongs (sound formed by two vowels in a single syllable) are challenging for learners. These phonemes, dental fricatives and such are not an area of expertise for me to teach. I use them naturally as a native speaker of English. There are teachers who have the skills to help students improve if that's your goal. I did understand your story completely. Bravo! Good luck with your learning goals.

Your voice is very nice.