THANK YOU IN ADVANCE FOR THE CORRECTIONS 🙂 PART 1 Do you agree or disagree with
the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.” Use reasons and details to
support your opinion. I agree that internet usage has an enormously positive (or: positive and widespread) effect on life in today’s world. In my opinion, access to the internet enables online studying, ordering (takeout) food, and it helps to waste less time while doing all of them (better: all while saving time we would otherwise waste doing these tasks). To begin with,many people use the internet to access social
media platforms,learn the subjects that they need and discover new things.We can
reach (better: we have access to) the best course materials easily.The advantages of online courses are
flexibility ,documentation ,reduced costs and being not tied down to a fixed
schedule (better: a flexible schedule). the Internet gives students the opportunity to pause lessons.
Thus,students can keep watching them whenever they’re available (better: students can watch at a pace that suits them, because the lessons are always available).They can obtain
the information fast and apply it to their tasks.The lessons start to become more
affordable and students do not pay as much money to take courses because they find lots
of subjects on the internet.They can decide to take the lessons which suit
them. Employers can carry out meetings and interviews, and some employees work
remotely thanks to internet access. Use of internet provides people with the means to
communicate with each no matter where they are (no abbreviations at the end of a phrase) as long as they have access to the
internet.Documents storage needs wide places (better: filing physical documents takes up a lot of space) but now they can be stored on cloud
applications.