Hi @DavidK! Thanks for your feedback

> There are a number of grammar issues in your sentences, unrelated to “in tatters”

I'd appreciate if you specify ones. It helps when people not just criticize but also correct. This is why I am here. To learn.

> But for your last sentence, “in tatters” usually refers to torn cloth, such as clothes.

Thanks for that

There are a number of grammar issues in your sentences, unrelated to “in tatters”. But for your last sentence, “in tatters” usually refers to torn cloth, such as clothes. Rust and salt would harm a boat but not typically leave it in tatters.

The windstorm left the sail of the boat in tatters. The owner had to replace it before he could sail again.

It might be easier to correct if you labeled your sentences with letters

a. businessman

b. ok, but I'd probably say … Zenith's hopes in tatters.

c. … the country's ….

d. tenses. Also Americans (but maybe not Brits) usually say "family is" "The family was in tatters after the patriarch passed away." "My family was left in tatters after the passing of Grandpa" ('Grandparent' is a relative term. A family doesn't have a 'grandparent' - a grandchild does). My grandmother died last month and the whole family is in tatters.