First thing I notice is how someone's dressed lol
Eyes.
If the eyes are kind, I will see it. If I see no kindness there, I will seek others.
Jonathan, I purposely used that word many times, it was no chance and accident. It is style, for a reason. I understand you dislike this style. You are allowed to dislike it. For this purpose that is how I chose to write, and if you don't like it that's fine. I like the repeated use of 'another' in this context. I did it purposely.
How they speak.
@Lydia:
I actually really liked your comment and the way you described it. It gave me & I'm sure (whoever else have read your comment) a new insight on ways to look at others and what makes them noticable depending on their traits. You seem like an observant person which is very great!
Regards.
first thing is how they look when they walk