My Mother
This is the 53rd day.
My mother has shaped part of my values, influeced my life and teached me how to be a good girl. I regard her as my mother as well as my friend.
I love her,respect her and will study hard in return for her. And I am proud of being her daughter.
I am grateful to everyone, especially to my family, friends and teachers.
Good night.
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My Mother
This is the 53rd day.
My mother has shaped many parts of my values, influenced my life and taught me how to be a good person*. I regard her as my mother as well as my friend.
I love her, respect her and will study hard in return for her in return**. And I am proud of being her daughter.
I am grateful to everyone, especially to my family, friends and teachers.
Good night.
- * "Good girl" implies that you are a child, or that you rigidly follow society's standards for "proper" behavior, especially in regard to dating, sex before marriage, etc. "Good person" (or possibly, "good woman") is more general, implying that you have a strong moral code.
- Watch your punctuation. Space after commas and periods.
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