Why china is one of the most important countries in the world?
Recent years, China has a big change in many aspects, such as financial status, political status. Personally speaking, I think china has become one of the most important countries in the word.
First of all, the amount of Chinese is so huge that this country has become the biggest country in the world. We can find Chinese anywhere around the world, sometimes, even though a small town in a little country there are many steps of Chinese. As an individual identity in the society net, I have many friends who are in other countries. In some big cities like Beijing or shanghai where are always a lot of people gathering there. We cannot ignore such this big country with so many peoples.
Second, China does really make a big progress in developing finance. It has surpassed Japan and became the second financial figure in the world. The speed of finance growing was very fast and this make Chinese’s life a great improved. Nowadays, China are full of electronic devices which means people can buy anything without cash or bank card and just pay the fees through their mobile phone. The public transportation of China is awesome that including subway, train, bus and taxi. Finance is one of the most important reasons that China has become the most important country in the world.
Last, China has more and more international influence in the world. As a united nation security council, China always devoted to solve some problems and respect other countries. As far as I know, China started a program named Legend of Silk-road which aimed at developing the trade between China and other countries. This program has gained a bunch of countries agreements and made a series of influence around the world.
In the final analysis, I think all of these reasons that make China so important.
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Why is China one of the most important countries in the world?
In recent years, China has changed in many respects such as in economic and political importance. I believe China has become one of the most important countries in the world.
First, China has a huge population. We can find Chinese people anywhere in the world. Even in small towns in small countries, there may be some Chinese people present. As a user of social networks, I have many friends who are in other countries. Big cities like Beijing or Shanghai have large concentrations of Chinese people. We cannot ignore such a big country with so many people.
Second, China has made big progress in developing its economy. China has surpassed Japan to become the second largest economy in the world. China's economy has grown very quickly, and has greatly improved the lives of Chinese people. Because there are so many electronic devices in China (especially mobile phones), people can buy anything without cash or bank cards. Public transportation in China is awesome, including subway, train, bus and taxi systems. China's economy is one of the most important reasons that it has become the most important country in the world.
Lastly, China has become more and more influential, internationally. As a member of the United Nations Security Council, China is always devoted to solving problems faced by other countries. I know of a program China started called the Belt and Road Initiative, which is aimed at developing trade between China and other countries. This program has achieved agreements with many countries and has had worldwide influence.
In summary, I think all these reasons make China very important.
- I am able to understand most of your points. This is a good, early effort.
- I believe the program you called "Legend of Silk-road" is known to the English-speaking as the "Belt and Road" initiative.
- I believe "Economy" is a better term than "Finances" for what you describe in your second point.
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There are lots of errors! I'm sure that you will improve as time goes on. Here's a list of the most important corrections needed:
• Proofread your work. Proper nouns should always begin with a capital letter.
• We often put the verb before the noun when asking a question: Why are leaves green? Why is the sky blue?
• "in recent years...."
• In this case you would use people, not peoples, and you should treat it as plural (people are, not people is).
• China is full of . . . (China is a singular noun.)
• I think all of these are reasons . . .
The good news is that I understood everything except "many steps of Chinese." If you can get your point across, that's something to be quite proud of!
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