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In the 1990s, Hong-Kong showed high-pitch development together with South Korea, Taiwan, and Singapore, and they were called “the Four Dragons”. Chinese people adored Hong Kong, at the same time, they felt antipathy to the region. On 16th, this complex feeling appeared as a strong resentment against an opinion advertisement on several local newspapers posted by Sir. Li Ka-shing (91), who is one of the best-known business tycoons in Hong-Kong. His posting could be perceived that Sir. Li refused the idea of strengthening the Chinese government's intervention in Hong Kong.
Sir. Li immigrated to Hong Kong at the age of 11, and became a legendary successful person, who made his fortune by investing real estates in the Chinese mainland. On the Chinese Internet, people’s postings were dominated by criticism saying, "What an ungrateful man he is, though he made money thanks to China”.
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Thank you again, Marc!
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Nothing to correct I think.
For the sentence: "His posting could be perceived that Sir. Li refused the idea of strengthening the Chinese government's intervention in Hong Kong."
I feel like there's something wrong, or maybe it's just preference/instinct. I might phrase it as:
"His posting could be perceived as Sir. Li refusing the idea of strengthening the Chinese government's intervention in Hong Kong."
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