Today

Today is a busy day. I got up at 6 am and ate breakfast. After breakfast, I washed bowls and plates dishes. Then I cleaned huseroom the rest of the house.

Our house is too big to for me! I must always have to do the housework these days, so i and it takes such a long time much time. to clean the houseroom. I hate to do this.

Washing clothes is my main duty chore. Every day i I spend a the morning to do these doing this. At Then, in the afternoon, i I go to my sister's shop to look after her baby until my mother after gets off of work. Then we get go home together.

Very good! A few notes:

Remember to use the proper verb tense, keep your verb tenses the same. "Got" is the past tense of "get", and is needed in the second sentence, and "cleaned" is the past tense of "clean", and is needed in the fourth sentence.

Remember to capitalize the word "I".

"At afternoon" is replaced with "in the afternoon" for clarity. This is the same with any general time of day ("in the morning", "in the evening", etc.). If it is a specific time, we use "at"; for example, "at 12:00 pm",or  "at noon".

If you have any questions about any other corrections, feel free to ask. :)

Today

Taday is a busy day.I get up at 6 am,after breakfast,I washed bowls and plates.Then i clean huseroom.houseroom Our house is to big to me.I must do the housework these days,so i take much time to clean the houseroom.I hate to do this.Washing clothes is my main duty.Every day i spend a morning to do these. At afternoon, i go to my sister's shop to look after her baby until my mother after work.Then we get home together.