Cold moonlight Don’t know what I’m going to write. Suddenly I just feel like very low energy. Moonlight in winter is bright but really cold. The sight at night in countryside is so quiet. Looking arou

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Cold moonlight Don’t know what I’m going to write. Suddenly I just feel like very low energy. Moonlight in winter is bright but really cold. The sight at night in countryside is so quiet. Looking around a bit before going to bed, it pulls my energy even lower. Good night everyone

12 gru 2019 14:47

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Cold Moonlight

Don’t know what I’m going to write. Suddenly, I just feel like very low energy. Moonlight in winter is bright but really cold. The sight <s>at</s> of night in the countryside is so <s>quiet</s> peaceful/tranquil. [1] Looking around a bit before going to bed, it pulls {better: drains, saps} [2] my energy even <s>lower</s> further. Good night everyone.

<ol><li>"Quiet" doesn't really have a visual element to it, so it doesn't quite work with "sight".</li><li>To lose (a person's physical) energy, we usually say drain or sap.</li></ol>

12 grudnia 2019

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