[ 204 First Time of A Year To The Public Bath ] Would you mind correcting my essay or writing ? If you were me, how would 
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Which part should I describe in detail? I hope my explanations are more clear. I hope you can understand this. Sincerely. I came to a public bath near my home town at first time of this year. There variety of baths and a hot dry sauna room and cool water bath too. I started to my routine at 9:10am and this facility open 9:00am. First of all, I took my all clothes off and went on the inside, then took a bucket of hot water me for three or four time for cleaning and rinsing. Second, I soaked in myself to the basic hot bath for five minutes, then I went out to the Japanese style of outdoor garden. I tried to be cool down for a while.It was pretty quaint. Third, I worked on sweating as much as possible such as gaining health conditioning and relaxing in the sauna room, the cool water bath and the outdoor garden.