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My favorite sports Could you help me correct my mistakes?thanks! Badminton is my favorite sports among all the popular sports. When I was a child, my father bought me a small racket which is special for kids. My father taught me how to play. Every day after school I played badminton with my parents. When I was in high school, I took part in a badminton competition but I lost very badly. After that, because of my strong interest in badminton, I followed a coach to learn for a short time. When I went to college, I joined in the badminton club and I practiced my skills with my club partner as much as I can. I was so crazy one day. I played badminton when the court was open and I left when the court was close. Due to badminton, I have learned that practice makes perfect and never give up when the situation is terrible because I still have the opportunity to success.

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My favorite sports

Could you help me correct my mistakes?Thanks!

Badminton is my favorite sport sports among all the popular sports. When I was a child, my father bought me a small racket which was is special for kids. My father taught me how to play. Every day after school I played badminton with my parents. When I was in high school, I took part in a badminton competition but I lost very badly. After that, because of my strong interest in badminton, I followed a coach to learn for a short time. When I went to college, I joined in the badminton club and I practiced my skills with my club partner as much as I can could. I was so crazy one day. I played badminton when from the time the court was open until and I left when the court was closed close.
Due to badminton, I have learned that practice makes perfect and to never give up when the situation is terrible because I still have the opportunity for to success.
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My favorite sports

Could you help me correct my mistakes?thanks!

Badminton is my favorite sports among all the popular sports. When I was a child my father bought me a small racket which is special for kids. My father taught me how to play. Every day after school I play ed badminton with my parents. When I was in high school, I took part in a badminton competition but I lost very badly. After that, because of my strong interest in badminton, I followed a coach to learn for a short time. When I went to college, I joined in the a badminton club and I practiced my skills with my club partner as much as I can. I was so crazy one day. I played badminton when the court was open and I left when the court was close.
Due to badminton, I have learned that practice makes perfect and never give up when the situation is terrible because I still have the opportunity to success succeed.




I am not a native English speaker but I just tried to correct some words, but I perfectly understand what you mean. Let's wait for others who can better correct it. By the way Mandarin and Cantonese are also some of the languages that I would like to learn someday so maybe you can help me out. :)

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