Revision of this story, Pls.
"The Sign of Four" is one of the story based on Sherlock holmes figure.
Sherlock Holmes was the most famous detective in london and for him his work was a very important thing in his life.
At the first the story told about Watson who was Sherlock’s friend and also an important helper with his cases.
In the past Watson worked as a doctor in the British army then in a mission he was near to died and so he decided to retire hilmself and came back to England.
It was a boring day when a woman went to the Holmes’s house to speak with him.
Miss Morston missed her father many years ago but recently she received a letter with the invite to come in the teatre without the police, here she'll meet che writer of a letter.
So she wanted the help of Sherlock and Watson to discover where was her father and also she wanted to know why she received even year a pearl from misterious man. was there a connection from these two thing?
Therefore they went to the appointment at the teatre and after that they followed the man who brought them to the Thaddeus Sholto’s house.
Thaddeus Sholto’s father was a friend of Miss Morston’s father.
Thaddeus told that the Miss Morston father died after an terrible argument with his father, the argument was about the discover of the Agra Treasure that they have had togheter some years ago.
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Revision of this story, Pls.
"The Sign of Four" is one of the stories based on the figure of Sherlock Holmes.
Sherlock Holmes was the most famous detective in London and for him his work was a very important thing in his life.
At the beginning the story told is about Watson, who was Sherlock’s friend and also an important aid in his cases.
In the past Watson worked as a doctor in the British army. In a mission he nearly died and so decided to retire and came back to England.
It was a boring day when a woman went to Holmes’ house to speak with him.
Miss Morston missed her father many years ago (? did her father die) . Recently she received a letter with an invite to come to the theatre without the police. There she will meet the writer of the letter.
Therefore, she sought the help of Sherlock and Watson to discover where her father was and also to know why she received a pearl from a mysterious man. Was there a connection between these two things?
So they went to the appointment at the theatre and afterwards followed the man there who brought them to a person named Thaddeus Sholto’s house.
Thaddeus Sholto’s father was a friend of Miss Morston’s father.
Thaddeus told them that Miss Morston's father died after a terrible argument with his father. The argument was about the discovery of the Agra Treasure that they have had done together some years ago.
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Revision of this story, Pls.
"The Sign of Four" is one of the story based on Sherlock Holmes' figure.
Sherlock Holmes was the most famous detective in London and for him his work was a very important thing in his life.
At the first the story told is about Watson, who was Sherlock’s friend, and also an important helper with in his cases.
In the past, Watson worked as a doctor in the British Army then in a mission he was near to died (not sure what you mean by this? Do you mean to say "he was close to his death"?) and so he decided to retire hilmself and came come back to England.
It was a boring day when a woman went to the Holmes’ house to speak with him.
Miss Morston missed (do you mean "lost"?) her father many years ago, but recently she received a letter with the an invite to come in the theatre without the police, here she'll meet che where she would meet the writer of a letter.
So she wanted the help of Sherlock and Watson to discover where was her father where her father was and also she wanted to know why she received even year (do you mean to say "every year"? In this case it would be: "why every year she received a pear") a pearl from mysterious man. Was there a connection from these two thing in both of these events?
Therefore, they went to the appointment at the theatre and after that they followed the man who brought them to the Thaddeus Sholto’s house.
Thaddeus Sholto’s father was a friend of Miss Morston’s father.
Thaddeus told (who did he tell this to? It's not clear) that the Miss Morston's father had died after an terrible argument with his father, the argument was about the discovery of the Agra Treasure that they have had togheter together some years ago (I would maybe say: "the Agra Treasure that they had discovered together some years ago")
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Revision of this story, Pls.
"The Sign of Four" is one of the stories based on Sherlock Holmes.
Sherlock Holmes was the most famous detective in London and for him his work was a very important thing in his life.
At the first the story told about Watson who was Sherlock’s friend and also an important helper with his cases.
In the past Watson worked as a doctor in the British Army then in a mission he nearly died and so he decided to retire himself and came back to England.
It was a boring day when a woman went to the Holmes’s house to speak with him.
Miss Morston lost her father many years ago but recently she received a letter with the invite to come to the theatre without the police, and here she'll meet the writer of the letter.
So she wanted the help of Sherlock and Watson to discover where her father was and also she wanted to know why she received even year a pearl from a mysterious man. Was there a connection with these two things?
Therefore they went to the meeting at the theatre and after that they followed the man who brought them to the Thaddeus Sholto’s house.
Thaddeus Sholto’s father was a friend of Miss Morston’s father.
Thaddeus told that the Miss Morston's father died after a terrible argument with his father. The argument was about the discovery of the Agra Treasure that they got together some years ago.
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