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Ezzat Yaseen
A sympathy I am very sorry for those who were anguished , deceived or betrayed by the ugly hidden truth of their significant others. Nothing can be more painful compared with that feeling. Nothing can heal the deep pain from their hearts. Nor the time can be useful to put out the fire inside. I am also sorry for those who are still suffering from their parent's faults. For those who lately discoverd that their beloved parents were murderers ,drug traffickers, or robbers. I really have a deep sympathy for all of them.

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I sympathize with you!/ Empathy/Sympathizing

I am very sorry to those who have been deceived or betrayed by a significant other. [ I think anguish is a bit awkward here, like "that causes me anguish" would sound more natural.] Nothing can be more painful than that feeling. Nothing can heal the deep pain in their hearts, nor can time be useful to extinguish the fire inside [I'm not sure I understand this part correctly?] I am also sorry for those who are still suffering from the faults [or mishaps, errors, etc] of their parents, for those who discovered that their beloved parents were murderers, drug traffickers, or robbers. I deeply sympathize with all of them [You could replace sympathy with empathy if you personally have been in their situation. Overall great entry!]

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