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Hi Sarah,
Translation-----Part of My Examination
In Chinese culture, Zhuangzi was the first person who came up with the word “leisure”; however, it is not as same as the Pleasure Pool that is a place for showering in Ximen Field. Whereas, the Pleasure Pool may borrow the idea of Zhuangzi, nowadays we advocate the leisurable lifestyle. It seems that the Oblates aspire to ideal achievement and Buddhists long for releasing from purgatory. On the contrary, Oblates are not leisurable at all [this is an awkward structure, try "have no time for leisure"] for the reason that there are so many commandments they have to obey, such as being vegetarians and living with strict precepts. Then let’s take a look at Buddhists. They quest for paradise, but their lives are full of unpleasure hardship and depression. Their lives are contain [or "are full of"] much more suffering.
Notes:
When Oblates is a group, we refer to them collectively as "the Oblates"
When Oblates is a single person, it's just "Oblates".
Cheers,
Andrew.
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