First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Eilen that is my English name, I come from HuNan province, which is a beautiful place in the south of China. Now I am staying in Shanghai city and working in a Germany company. i want to improve my English, because my English is so bad.
Who can help me improve it, thanks.

Not too bad. ^^ You can also say, "I want to improve my English, because it is so bad". Always say "I am", not "i am". (Big I) 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Eilen that is my english name, i come from HuNan province which is a beautiful place in south of China, Now  stay in Shanghai city and working in a Germany company. i want to improve my english, because my english is so bad.
Who can help me improve it, thanks.