An Essay……

The internal and external and developed a humble studious temperament to me 1.I will never give up pursuing the truth. I believe that when I learn more and feel more can it will keep me going on to find out even more. I'm am good at to expressing myself.   myselves,My positive attitude and optimistic ways always infected others. I also believe that communication is the soul of the best reveal 2 real power.

Making Make friends widely, pay attention to what they say 2  contacts, be cheerful and generous. generosity,that is  These are very important for me,because I know I have to live with them,and  I cannot live like a hermit.   can't leave them away.That's This does not mean that I am not independence , dependent.  I just wanted to respect everything around me.  This includes my friends whom I love,and be sincere even to strangers.  They all live in the same environment as I. the people whom I even don't know,and the environment which I'm living in it.

I can't cannot give up this opportunity opportunites to enlarge boraden my vision, horizon because if I have a broader mind I can make a more forward thing.3Knowledge is very important, practice but practical knowledge is more so important.  And I do want to bring this kindness to others. I like talking with different people, talking about their confusion,learn about their problems and give them good counsel. some warm words.I like writing,and I like writing especially ones that to can encourage others.  The best articles that have the power of encouraging to give them hope and to heal their wounds.  I have also learnt from psychology and spiritual analysis methods by myself to help me how to have a patient ear. listen what people realing saying.

You have the ideas but unable to express them out in English.  This is understandable.  You are learning it.  It's like you have the melody in your head but you don't play the piano well to express that feeling out.

You need to learn the rules of punctuation spacing.  If you don't know, see http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm

If you don't understand, ask!

1.  This sentence is obfuscate!  I don't understand what you are trying to say.  Write in Chinese if you want a more accurate correction.  I'm skipping to the next sentence.

2.  Again I don't understand what you are trying to say.  Write in Chinese.  I am guessing here.

3. This is understood and is obvious.  It would be like 画蛇添足!  In English, it can be insulting the intelligence of your readers.