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plz help me!!!
* I'll send the following e-mail to the company which is supposed to contract.
plz collect the following sentences ASAP. ^^
Bret,
Thank you for your promt reply.
My name is Juhye Kim from the strategic planning Dept. at OOP and I will be replacing Mr. Kim for the current contract .
After reviewing the attached contract and invoice regarding our product, "Happy Jam", I have discovered that some changes are nessicary due to the recent changes within our company.
I’d like to have the following changes made.
Licensee : OOPT
3th Fl., Hoon Bldg. Okryeondong, Yeonsu gu, Incheon, Korea
Also if you could change the name of a person in charge from "Soonhji Ahn" to "Juhye Kim"
I really appreciate your help and Thanks in Advance
Sincerely,
Juhye Kim
plz help me!!!
* I'll send the following e-mail to the company which is supposed to contract.
plz collect the following sentences ASAP. ^^
Hello, Brett.
Thank you for your prompt reply.
I’m Juhye Kim from the Strategic Planning Dept. at OOP
I will be replacing Mr. Kim on this contract .
First, the title of our product is “Happy Jam”.
I reviewed the attached contract and invoice.
There should be some changes made because of the recent spin-off of our company.
I’d like to have the following changes made.
Licensee : OOPT
3th Fl., Hoon Bldg. Okryeondong, Yeonsu gu, Incheon, Korea
I also ask you to change the name of a person in charge from "Soonhji Ahn" to "Juhye Kim"
I hope you will resend to me the revised contract.
Thank you
Regards,
Juhye Kim
plz help me!!!
* I'll send the following e-mail to the company which is supposed to contract.
plz collect the following sentences ASAP. ^^
Hello, Brett.
Thank you for your promt reply.
I’m Juhye Kim from the strategic planning dept. at OOP (Use the full word department)
I will be replacing Mr. Kim on this contract .
First, a title of our product is “Happy Jam”. (the) (the)
I reviewed the attached contract and invoice.
There should be some changes because of the recent spin-off of our company. (What is a spin-off??)
I’d like to have the following changes made. :
Licensee : OOPT
3th Fl., Hoon Bldg. Okryeondong, Yeonsu gu, Incheon, Korea
I also ask you to change the name of a person in charge from "Soonhji Ahn" to "Juhye Kim". (the)
I hope you resend me to collected contract. (I don't quite understand this statement)
Thank you
Regards,
Juhye Kim
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