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Fiona
My hometown I was born in Luoyang, Henan Province. Luoyang is a tourism and industry city, in ancient China which is the capital of nine dynasties, so there are a lot of historical sites. The city flower is the peony which stands for riches and honour. In early April people from all over the country are coming to see penoy flowers. I love my hometown, and welcome to Luoyang.
30 sty 2012 12:43
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My hometown

I was born in Luoyang, Henan Province. Luoyang is a tourism tourist and industry industrial city,. In ancient China which is it was the capital of the nine dynasties, so there are a lot of historical sites.

The city flower is the peony which stands for riches and honour. In early April people from all over the country are coming come to see peony flowers.

I love my hometown, and welcome to Luoyang.

 

Your English is very good! Keep up the good work. I would definitely like to visit Luoyang one day :) 加油!

1 lutego 2012

My hometown

I was born in Luoyang, Henan Province. Luoyang is a tourism and industry city,. In ancient China, which is it was the capital of in nine dynasties, so there are a lot of historical sites.

The city flower is the peony which stands for riches and honour. In early April, people from all over the country are coming to see the penoy flowers.

I love my hometown, and welcome to Luoyang.

 

Luoyang sounds like a nice place to visit to see the sites. I might just visit the city one day!

30 stycznia 2012
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