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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi, I'm Sara. I live in the Netherlands 1, and I speak very good Dutch, but my Englisch and Spanish are not very good. I hope I can meet serious/normal 2 people that 3 can help me in earnesty. And I can also help people that those who want to learn Dutch.
Bye!
Just write more and you will improve :)
1. This is usually one of the tell tale signs that we know you are not a native English speaker. Holland is the term used even though it is technically wrong. :)
2. You don't use "normal people". This implies that abnomality or madness. Serious is a better word.
3. "Who" is used for people and "that" for everything else.
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hi, I'm Sara. I live in the Netherlands , and I speak very good Dutch, but my English and Spanish are not very good. I hope I can meet serious people can help me in earnesty. I can help those who want to learn Dutch.
Bye,
Sara
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