First notebook entry: Introducing myself

No fancy correction key.  ha ha.

Hi~
I'm Dean. < period (.)
I'm looking for someone who would like to learn the Korean language or culture or practice English (because I'm studying English for an exam).
I like talking with people who live overseas.
I don't care about your nationality, gender or age.
Would you like to be my friend? If you would, just send me an email.
Don't be hesitate.  mate~! < "mate" is an Australian expression. Have you
been to Austrailia to learn English?  We don't say it in the USA.
Bye~

Well I do hesitate.  Why?
Looks like you already have many friends on Italki.  (young women)
...and I really hate crowds.  ㅋㅋ  But I hope this helps you.
I believe you really want to prepare for your test.  If you are serious
really serious let me know. 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi.~
I'm Dean.~
I'm looking for someone/a person who wants to learn Korean language or about the culture, or practice English (because I'm studying English for an exam).
I like talking with/to people who live overseas.
I don't care about your nationality, sex, and or age.
If Do you want to be my friend?  Just send me an email.
Don't be hesitate hesitant, mate~!  (OR:  Don't hesitate, mate!)
Bye!~

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Blue = suggestion
Red = correction/addition
Underline = capitalize
Orange bold = punctuation

Nice job.^^  Let me know if you have any questions.