Thanks,hafsol.They made sense to me.I had been taught English by Chinese teachers.I want to make friends with native English speakers.

Hi, Maggie. I think your English is just fine. However, I might suggest a few revisions: You said "But my English is very poor that I hardly talk with people in English frequently." A better way to say this, perhaps, is "However, my English is very poor because I hardly ever speak with people in it." You do not have to repeat the word "English" in the same sentence, because you already mentioned it. Also, it is usually a good idea not to begin a sentence with "But," but rather use "However" or another similar word (at least in formal situations). You should say "in THE small town of Xilingol, Inner Mongolia, China" rather than "in a small town of Xilingol." I hope my comments make sense. If you have any questions, I would be glad to answer them! I'm looking forward to getting to know you :)