Who can help me correct my short composition? Wonderful Summer Vacation This is my first such long summer vacation. By this chance, I want to find one or two part-time jobs. Because I want to save money, I want to buy what I need and learn what I want. I want to take an individual travel to Japan as well. Last summer vacation, I worked in a convenient store, I learned how to deal with many kinds of customer. This year, I want to take another kind of job. I think I can learn somethings different while I am working. Furthermore, I want to pick up some books which interest me. Last semester, I joined in a reading group. I just found out reading is really good for us. Althought I have to work, I will still take some days off beacause I want to spend time with my family. Since I entered college, my twin sister and I were separated. As a result, I cherish the time we are togother more than before. I think my summer vacation will be wonderful if I can carry all my plans out. What job would you like to do? Why? I want to do a job which can spread happiness to others. Like everyone, I want to carry out my dream and do a longed-for job. Furthermore, the job I can always hold my passion and I will not be tired of it. Running a café is my dream, because I really fond of tasting sweet food. I have a sweet tooth. When I eat dessert, I feel blissful and happy. I want to provide a place where people can relax and spend their leisure time. People can read, listen to musics and chat with their friends. The most important is they can taste my dessert. When they taste my dessert, they not only can taste the flavor but the love. All I want to do is give people happiness and warmness in such big and busy city.