采摘黑莓水果。
今天我跟我的儿子一起去采摘黑莓。我玩得非常开心。天气很好，很热。秋天，黑莓正当令时，所以现在找到黑莓还为时尚早，但不管怎样我们还是找到了一些有熟透黑莓的灌木。
Today I went blackberry picking with my son. I had a great time. The weather was good, very hot. Blackberries are in season in autumn, it's a bit early still to find Blackberries, but despite this we still managed to find a few bushes with some ripe ones.
因为黑莓很湿软、易压碎，我们需要小心地摘下黑莓水果。有的时候我们捏得太用力了，因此黑莓水让把我们的手指变得染成紫色了。采摘了很多的黑莓之后，我们回家了。回到家时，我们洗了黑莓，然后吃了它们，还有冰淇淋加和蛋白酥皮饼。非常好吃！
Because blackberries are very squidgy we needed to pick the blackberries very carefully. Sometimes we squeezed too hard and the blackberry juice made our fingers purple. After picking lots of blackberries we went home. When we got home we washed the blackberries and ate them with ice cream and meringues. Very tasty!
你吃过黑莓水果吗？你喜欢吃黑莓吗？
Have you eaten blackberries? Do you like them?
吃过。我用黑莓泡过酒，我们也叫黑莓“桑葚”（sang shen），每次吃它都弄得满嘴是紫色，舌头看着很恐怖。
采摘黑莓水果。
今天我跟我的儿子一起去采摘黑莓。我玩得非常开心。天气很好，很热。秋天，黑莓正当令，所以现在找到黑莓还为时尚早，但不管怎样我们还是找到了一些有熟透黑莓的灌木一些树枝上还是有熟透的了的黑莓。
Today I went blackberry picking with my son. I had a great time. The weather was good, very hot. Blackberries are in season in autumn, it's a bit early still to find Blackberries, but despite this we still managed to find a few bushes with some ripe ones.
因为黑莓很湿软 ，易碎，我们需要小心地摘下黑莓水果。有的时候我们捏得太用力了，因此黑莓汁水把让我们的手指染成了变得紫色。采摘了很多的黑莓之后，我们回家了。回到家后时，我们洗了黑莓，然后吃了它们，还有冰淇淋加蛋白酥皮饼。非常好吃！ （然后我们把黑莓，冰激凌和meringues拌在一起吃 ，简直太好吃了） Anyway ,what is meringues?^^
Because blackberries are very squidgy we needed to pick the blackberries very carefully. Sometimes we squeezed too hard and the blackberry juice made our fingers purple. After picking lots of blackberries we went home. When we got home we washed the blackberries and ate them with ice cream and meringues. Very tasty!
你吃过黑莓水果吗？你喜欢吃黑莓吗？
Have you eaten blackberries? Do you like them?
你的中文已经很好了，加油！^^
一、中国人写作文一般不用句号结尾。
Chinese don't use a period at the end of an article's title.
二、我从没见过这种句子，能指教一下吗？
I've never seen such a sentece like "go sth doing"(I went blackberry picking......), could you plz give me your advice?
三、“天气很好，很热。”没法理解，如果热，不会被认为是好天气，也许你想说“晴朗”？
I can't undertand the sentence "The weather was good, very hot." If it's hot, would not be good, maybe you want to say "sunny"?
四、“正当（时）令”是个纯粹的书面词语，其一是表示某种瓜果、蔬菜等成熟，正好到了收获、采摘或者上市的时候；其二是表示做某些事，正是最合适的时候。
把“正当（时）令“放在这里（.......秋天，黑莓正当令，所以现在找到黑莓还为时尚早........），是不合适的。
You know, my English is not that good, I try my best to translate the last one, lol
“正当（时）令” is only used to be a writen language, it has two meanings, the one is "some fruits or vegetables are ripe, it's the best right time to gather,pick(off), or carry to sale"; the other meaning is "it is high time that doing sth".
So it's not good that you placed the word 正当令 in the sentence ".......秋天，黑莓正当令，所以现在找到黑莓还为时尚早........".
It should be "秋天，黑莓才完全成熟，所以 现在找到黑莓还为时尚早....... "。
”为时尚早“这个词用得很好！！！
God, my meal gets burnt!
