콘서트 (concert)

나는 나가 연주회를 볼 수 있었다 때문에 이렇게 행복했습니다..oh please help me with this..i'm trying to say that i'm so happy because i was able to watch the concert..i'm really sure that my hangul was wrong..

저는 연주회를 볼 수 있었기 때문에 행복해요.

콘서트 (concert)

나는 나가 연주회를 볼 수 있었다 때문에 이렇게 행복했습니다..oh please help me with this..i'm trying to say that i'm so happy because i was able to watch the concert..i'm really sure that my hangul was wrong..


저는 제가 연주회(if it's singer's concert you can say 콘서트, 연주회 is the performence for instrumental things.)를 볼 수 있었다는 것이 너무 행복했어요.

your hangul looks ok, just need to keep on going. that's all dear. :)