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I hate October . October seems to be the month of heart breaking .It has broken my heart three times in a row and now the time has come to hurt me once more .I begin to hate October and hate myself too because I can do nothing to change this fact.I can not afford tears and sleepless nights, I can not afford pain .
30 wrz 2012 22:15
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I hate October.

 

October seems to be the month of heart breaksing. It had broken my heart three times in a row and now the time has come to I am hurt me once more in this month.  I began to hate October it and hate myself too because I cannot do nothing anything to change this fact the circumstances. I can not no longer to afford tears and sleepless nights.  , I can not cannot afford anymore pain.

30 września 2012

I hate October .

October seems to be the month of heartbreaks .It broke my heart three times in a row and now it has come again to hurt me. I began to hate October and myself too because I could do nothing to change the fact of heartbreaks.I cannot afford tears,sleepless nights and pain.

13 listopada 2012
Everything happens for a reason. Just have faith. remember that the glass is always half full!
4 października 2012
I am sorry, it was a joke. Have a good day!
4 października 2012
Yurly,serranith,Jura.Kevinand Man....thanks guys..I really appreciate your comments.
3 października 2012
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