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Introducing myself
Hello everybody :)
I am Beatriz from Barcelona. I'm 20 and am studying Biomedical Sciences at university.
What I want to do is to be a researcher and, for this [very] reason, it is very important [for me] to have a good level in command over English, as everything in science is in English! I'll have to write articles and maybe [I'll have to] give some lectures. And , all of this, of course, in English. In addition, it's quite difficult to find a job here, in Spain,. sSo I maybe might have go to work abroad in the future.
My native language is Spanish, but I also have a good level of command over Catalan as I always [or often] speak with my friends in that language.
Some of my interests are books and music. I love going to concerts or listening to music at home. It's a really good way to relax!
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Also, thanks a lot for correcting my note. Muchas gracias amiga. Sorry for posting it again. I jumbled up the paragraphs in my previous correction. Also forgot to put pointers in the beginning.
Introducing myself
Hello everybody :)
I am Beatriz from Barcelona. I'm 20 and am studying Biomedical Sciences at university.
What I want to do is to be a researcher and, for this [very] reason, it is very important [for me] to have a good level in command over English, as everything in science is in English! I'll have to write articles and maybe [I'll have to] give some lectures. And , all of this, of course, in English. In addition, it's quite difficult to find a job here, in Spain,. sSo I maybe might have go to work abroad in the future.
My native language is Spanish, but I also have a good level of command over Catalan as I always [or often] speak with my friends in that language.
Also, thanks a lot for correcting my note. Muchas gracias amiga.
Some of my interests are books and music. I love going to concerts or listening to music at home. It's a really good way to relax!
Introducing myself
Hello everybody :)
I am Beatriz, from Barcelona. I'm 20 and I'm studying Biomedical Sciences at university. What I want to do is to be a researcher and, for this reason, it is very important to have a good level in English, as everything in science is in English! I'll have to write articles and maybe I'll have to give some lectures. And all of this, of course, would be in English. In addition, it's quite difficult to find a job here, in Spain, so I maybe might have to go to work abroad in the future.
My native language is Spanish, but I also have a good level of Catalan as I always speak with my friends in that language. (as I always speak that language with my friends might be slightly more natural phrasing, but this reads fine).
Some of my interests are books and music. I love going to concerts or listening to music at home. It's a really good way to relax!
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