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Why the Chinese People are unhappy (3) Reason three: anxiety about future The Chinese government acknowledged there is a huge gap in China's pension fund, It caused many people worry about whether they can get enough pension in retirement. And the high prices of medical expenses included the major disease security, The rapid inflation ,The Children's employment, The rising property prices, The complicated interpersonal relationship. All kind of these reason, No matter young or old, Both in the anxiety state.

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Why the Chinese People are unhappy (3)

Reason three: anxiety about the future
The Chinese government (has) acknowledged (that) there is a huge gap in China's pension fund, It caused causing many people to worry about whether they can get enough pension in for retirement. And (Also contributing are) the high prices of medical expenses including (the major disease security) insurance, rapid inflation, Children's employment underage workers, rising property prices, and complicated interpersonal relationships. All kind Due to all of these reasons, no matter young or old, everyone is experincing anxiety.

 

Hi, very interesting topic indeed. I hope I preserved your meaning in my corrections. Let me know if you have any questions. 

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People worry about the same things all over the world.
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I thought Baystateblue did great. We don't say major disease security. I have health insurance and it covers major diseases.

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