First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning English because make I want to work in America and miesake  freinds  make friends from all countries.
My native language is Arabic  and I grew up in Egypt.
I enjoy art, reading, surfing the internet, music and my own work in the pharmaceutical field.

Notes: Punctuation is an issue.

Leave a space after a punctuation mark but not before.

so   reading, surfing is correct.

reading , surfing is incorrect

reading,surfing is incorrect.

You don't need a comma in front of and.

Just in case, a comma is this charachter ,

An English speaker would always say "grow up" or "grew up" or a variant depending on the situation.

 I am learning English because make I want to work in America and make friends from all countries. 
My native language is Arabic  and I grew up in Egypt. 
I enjoy art, reading, surfing the internet, music and my own work in thepharmaceutical field.