Some thought about the Chirstmas Day
Although Hong Kong have been one part of China for a long time, it keeped the celebration of western holiday. The Chirtmas Day is one of them, So some of us come to think that if the Chinese holiday or western holiday should been celebrated in Hong Kong,
As a metripolis city, different kind of cultures may be introduce in HK, So the people in HK should open the door to all cultures, This must be the characteristic of HK,
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Some thoughts about the on Chirstmas Day
Although Hong Kong have has been one part of China for a long time now, it is still keeped kept the celebration of celebrating this western holiday. The Chirtmas Day is one of them. So Some of us come to think that if the Chinese holiday or western holiday should been celebrated in Hong Kong, [Don't understand what you are saying here.]
As a metropolis city ["polis" mean city" so adding "city" is redundant], different kind of cultures may be introduce co-exist in Hong Kong. , So the people in HK should Hong Kong people are open/receptive the door to all cultures. [The way you wrote it, implies that the people are not.] This must should be the continuing attitude in Hong Kong. characteristic of HK,
To Hong Kong's fabulous foods, here I come in January! :))))))))))
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