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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello,everyone! My name is HanYu from China and my English name is Susan. I am positive and full of passion for life.i I am going to graduate from college soon and have found a job in Shenzhen as a foreign trade salesman. I enjoy making friends and helping others.My hobby is listenging to the music , watching movies and traveling. I am here to improve my English in all aspects and make foreign friends at the same time. I also would like to help you to learn Chinese if there is any need. Hope to recieve your reply soon.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello,everyone!
My name is HanYu from China and my English name is Susan. I am positive and full of passion for life. I am going to graduate from college soon and have found a job in Shenzhen as a foreign trade salesman. I enjoy making friends and helping others. My hobby is listenging to the music, watching movies and traveling. I am here to improve my English in all aspects and make foreign friends at the same time. I also would like to help you to learn Chinese, if there is any need.
Hope to recieve your reply soon.

 

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not listening to the music. just say listening music. and by the way your english is not bad.............

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