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busy school life This is my second year of college life,and it's so busy! There are 11 kinds of courses in one week,and nearly each of them need me to prepare a presentation! Also,i need to rehearse my English drama play,the competition is very close,and my character is RED QUEEN of ALICE IN WANDERLAND! =_= isn't ridiculous? The reason why i was chose was i am strongest girl in our class.....What a funny story T^T

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busy school life

This is my second year of college life,and it's so busy! There are 11 kinds of courses in one week,and nearly each of them need me to prepare a presentation! Also,i need to rehearse my English drama play,the competition is very close,and my character is RED QUEEN of ALICE IN WANDERLAND! =_= isn't ridiculous? The reason why i was chosen was i am strongest girl in our class.....What a funny story T^T

 

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Strongest girl in the class?? I am not totally familiar with the story, but does the Red Queen have to beat someone up? Why must your character be strong?

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