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The mistakes you made were:

The first one, well, you misspelled a word. You dropped the second "n" in "encanta", and you also put an "o" instead of an "a". "Encanto" means "charm". "Encanta" is a tense of the verb "encantar" (to like, to love).

The second and third mistakes were made because you didn't pay attention to the written accent, a very important thing when you are writing in Spanish. "País" has a written accent on the "i" and "música" has it on the "u".

The fourth mistake was again a misspelling. You wrote "bueno" instead of "buena". In Spanish, we have gender differences in words. You were saying "life is good". "Life" is feminine, "la vida" ("la" is a feminine article), so if "life" is feminine, the adjective ("good) has to be feminine too. "Bueno", with an "o", is masculine. "Buena" is feminine.

And your last three mistakes can be pretty easy to make if you are a native English speaker. You use the gerunds to talk about things that would be nouns, or infinitives. We in Spanish say "Yo amo bailar", o "Yo amo el baile". If you translate it literally to English, it would be like "I love to dance" or "I love the dance". It isn't grammatically correct in English, but it is in Spanish. The same is the other way around. In English you say "I love dancing", and if you translate it literally to Spanish, you get "You amo bailando". It's completely incorrect in Spanish. So, if you wanted to say "I need to practice my reading, writing and speaking", in Spanish you have two options. Turn your gerunds ("-ing") into nouns or into infinitives. If you turn them into nouns, you can say "Yo necesito practicar mi lectura, escritura y habla". If you turn them into infinitives, you can say "Yo necesito practicar leer, escribir y hablar.". You have another option, though, using gerunds in Spanish, but you have to change slightly the meaning of the sentence. You can say "Yo necesito practicar leyendo, escribiendo y hablando.", but that in English would be like "I need to practice by reading, writing and speaking.". It's not exactly the same as you intended to say.

I hope this helped you.

See you!

Priscila.

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Soy un estudiante de Estados Unidos.Me encata mi pais porque tenemos de todo.Comida,deportes,musica todo jaja.Mi vida ahora es buena. Yo necesito practicar mis habilidades de lectura, escritura y oralidad .Gracias :)

Mi Vida

Soy un estudiante de Estados Unidos. Me encanta mi pais porque tenemos  todo. Comidas,deportes,música de todo jaja. Mi vida ahora es buena. Yo necesito practicar leyendo,escribiendo y hablando.

Gracias :)