IELTS Task 2 Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effectiv

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IELTS Task 2 Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? Many people guess that involving the price of gas is important for environment and solving problem with traffic jams, but others do not agree with increasing cost of petrol. I will look at different point of view. Today some people think that they have to saving environment. Moreover, they guess that if they were increased the price of gasoline, they will help for nature and decrease traffic jams in city. Becides, government should solving problems with traffic jams because people spend a large amount of time for staying there. I think that the most popular solving to decrease traffic jams and save nature is integration bikes in infrastructure of the city. Government should create system for safety of bikers, who prefer ride a bike, but do not use a car. It is a great idea for big cities because people will get empty road and improving level of health because of good environment and riding on bike. On the other hand, we can see that if government was increase the price of gas, there will new problems. For example, more expensive price of ticket for trip. Also, it influence on world's economic. Some people guess that all area depend on the price of petrol for barrel. I believe that government can create another decision of solving problem with traffic jams and pollution. In conclusion I can say that today the most important problems are pollution and traffic jams in the bid cities. In my opinion people should save the nature and choose bike. Also, involving price of gasoline is not good idea. The argument we have presented that solving these will have a huge influence on nature and life of people. You can help me if you will use IELTS Writing Mark Schemes http://www.examenglish.com/IELTS/IELTS_Writing_MarkSchemes.html

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IELTS Task 2

Hello, English is not my mother language but I want to add a comment to help edit your essay. It could be wrong, but I think it is also a good way to learn, right? Let some native English user correct your essay, and the following is just my opinion.

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Many people guess that involving the price of gas is important for environment and solving problem OF traffic jams, but others do not agree with increasing cost of petrol. I will look at different point of view.

Today some people think that they have to SAVE environment. Moreover, they guess that if they INCREASE the price of gasoline, they will help for nature and decrease traffic jams in city. BeSides, government should SOLVE problems OF traffic jams because people spend a large amount of time for staying there. I think that the most popular SOLUTION to decreasING traffic jams and savING nature is integration OF bikes in infrastructure of the city. Government should create system for safety of bikers, who prefer ridING a bike THAN usING a car. It is a great idea for big cities because people will get empty road and improvE level of health BY riding on bike IN GOOD ENVIRONMENT.

On the other hand, we can see that if government INCREASE the price of gas, there will CAUSE new problems. For example, price of ticket for trip IS MORE EXPENSIVE. Also, it influencT world's economY. Some people guess that all area depend on the price of petrol for barrel. I believe that government can create another decision of solving problem OF traffic jams and pollution.

In conclusion I can say that today the most important problems are pollution and traffic jams in the bid cities. In my opinion people should save the nature and choose bike. Also, involving price of gasoline is not good idea. The argument we have presented that solving these will have a huge influence on nature and life of people.

You can help me if you will use IELTS Writing Mark Schemes
http://www.examenglish.com/IELTS/IELTS_Writing_MarkSchemes.html

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