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mother's brithday Today is my mother's brithday,but i can't celebrate for her,becouse i working in other province,i called her ,and singing the brithday song for her in the morning ,she was very happy,and remind me find a nice boy to get marry as soon as possible.yeah,this is my task this year,my parents remind me once a week,but now I even don't have the boyfriend.in order for my morther happy,i promised ,i will be hardwork for that.maybe this is chinese stressful,get married not for love ,but you are old .infact it's very negative.although i'm very sad,but i understand my parents. Anyway ,today is my morther's birthday,wish my mother happy birthday ,and keep healthy.

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mother's brithday birthday

Today is my mother's brithday,but i can't celebrate it with for her,becouse I am working in other another province.  I called her and singing sang the brithday song for her in the morning.  She was very happy and she reminded me find a nice boy to get marry as soon as possible.  Yeah, this is my task this year. My parents remind me once a week, but right now I even don't even have the a boyfriend.  In order for my morther mother to be happy, I promised i will be hardwork for work hard on that.  Maybe this is part of  the stress of being Chinese stressful,  to get married not for love ,but because you are old.  In fact it's very negative depressing. Although I'm very sad, but I understand my parents.
Anyway, today is my mother's birthday.  I wish my mother a happy birthday and hope she will stay  healthy.

 

I enjoyed reading your notebook entry.  Good luck with finding the perfect boyfriend this year.  I hope you will find a nice boy that you truly love and who loves you too.

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mother's birthday

Today is my mother's birthday, but i can't celebrate for with her, because i am working in another province. I called her, and sanging the 'happy birthday song for her in the morning.  She was very happy, and reminded me find a nice boy to get marry as soon as possible. Oh well, yeah, this is my task for this year and my parents remind me once a week, but now I even don't have the a boyfriend. in order to keep for my mother happy, I promised, I will be try hard work for that. Maybe this is chinese pressure stressful, getting married not for love, but because your parents think you are getting old. in fact it's very negative. Although i'm very sad, but still i understand my parents.
Anyway, today is my mother's birthday, wish my mother happy birthday , and keep healthy.

 

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No hurry to get married!  Take your time!

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mother's brithday

Today is my mother's brithday,but I can't celebrate it with for her,because I'm working in another province, I called her,and sang the brithday song to her this morning,she was very happy,and told  me to find a nice boy and get married as soon as possible.Yeah,this is my task this year, my parents remind me of this once a week,but at the moment I don't even have the a boyfriend. In order to make my mother happy, I promise her that I will work hard to do this.Maybe this is a Chinese way of life, to get married not for love but for your old age. Infact it's a very negative reason. Although I'm very sad about it, I can understand my parents.
Anyway,today is my morther's birthday so wish her happy birthday,and keep healthy.

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