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nothing special I was chatting with a friend on skype and he told me that he purchased a new cell phone, which label is: LG optimus L5. He had to buy a new cell phone because your old one was stolen while he was walking on the mountains with a friend. I even remember the words that he wrote on Facebook, it was something like this: I was walking with a friend and we choosed to walk around the mountains for a little while but when we were looking at the landscape, a motherfucker stood at my side with a gun and pulled out my phone. When I read his post on Facebook I asked him after on Skype and he told me all the story. My friend had a very bad day but he is happy now because he is wearing a new phone. I don't know what else I could write because I am tired and my mind is not working well today, so I am going to finish this text. I hope that a kind person read my text to I can know where my mistakes are.. Thanks a lot and have a good rest of day.

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I was chatting with a friend on skype and he told me that he purchased a new cell phone, which brand is: LG optimus L5. He had to buy a new cell phone because his old one was stolen while he was walking in the mountains with a friend. I even remember the words that he wrote on Facebook, it was something like this: I was walking with a friend and we decided to walk around the mountains for a little while but when we were looking at the landscape, a motherfucker stood at my side with a gun and pulled out my phone. When I read his post on Facebook I asked him after on Skype and he told me the whole story. My friend had a very bad day but he is happy now because he has a new phone.
I don't know what else I can write because I am tired and my mind is not working well today, so I am going to finish this text. I hope that a kind person reads my text so I can know where my mistakes are.. Thanks a lot and have a good rest of day.

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