Hello my little friend
It's a letter for my new friend from another country. He like to swim, to drink any bear and to speak with a trees.
Hello V.C. How are you ? Any news ? What does you do under that tree what was in the middle of the green glade?
It's very interesting for me. Answer please - who was that big fat crank outside your yard ? I have a thought about all of happended at that really amazing time... How can I repeat this in this life ?
Yours faithfully, M.T.
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Elena, thanks for adjustment!
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Hello my little friend
It's a letter for my new friend from another country. He like to swim, to drink any beer and to speak with a trees.
Hello V.C. How are you ? Any news ? What does you do under that tree what was in the middle of the green glade?
It's very interesting for me. Answer please - who was that big fat crank outside your yard ? I have a thought about all of happended at that really amazing time... How can I repeat this in this life ?
Yours faithfully, M.T.
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Так, поправки оставим англоговорящим народностям, но этот момент не могу оставить незамеченным: Вы написали ''drink any bear'', но 'bear' нельзя drink, 'bear' = 'медведь' =))) 'Beer' - пиво ;))
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