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Describe an (important) occasion when you was late. (topic: describe an important occasion when you was late) (It's for speaking, not writing) I have to say, being late for taking my graduation photo of junior high school is a regrettable experience for me. Even though I have graduated from junior high school for 2 years, I still feel sorry for that. I remember it happened in May, a month before I left school. Our teacher forgot to tell us when shall we arrive at school for taking graduation photo.One morning, I went to school by bus as usual, but the road which near my home has to be repaired at that time. Unfortunately, I did not notice the information about changing driving route which was sticked on the bus window. After a ten-minute nap, I found I was in an unfamiliar place! I was really shocked and terrified, and I had no idea how did it happen. But I believed that a ten-minute driving distance would not take me far from my home. So I decided to take a taxi. However, it cost me more time than I thought. I spent nearly half an hour to take a taxi, but none was empty. At last, I changed three buses to school. There's no doubt that, I was late. What's worse, I found the whole class was waiting for me to take graduation photos for an hour. After knowing my experience, they didn't blame me, but I still felt so sorry. Although it had happened for two years, whenever I see the unforgettable photo, I always think of this late experience. Now, I'm more careful for every detail in my daily life.
6 wrz 2013 05:36
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Describe An (Important) Occasion When You Were (was) Late.

(topic: describe an important occasion when you was late)
(It's for speaking, not writing)

I have to say that  (,) being late for (taking) my graduation photo at (of) junior high school was (is) a regrettable experience for me. Even though it is two years since I have graduated (from junior high school for 2 years) , I still regret being late (feel sorry for that).

I remember it happened in May, a month before I left school. Our teacher forgot to tell us when we should (shall we) arrive at school for the (taking) graduation photo.One morning, I went to school by bus,  as usual, but the road (which) near my home was in repair (has to be repaired) at that time. Unfortunately, I did not notice the information about the change in bus route (changing driving route) which was stuck (sticked) on the bus window. After a ten-minute nap, I found I was in an unfamiliar place! I was really shocked and terrified, and (I) had no idea how it happened (did it happen) . But I believed that a ten-minute driving distance would not have taken (take) me far from my home. So,  I decided to take a taxi instead . However, it cost me more time than I thought. I spent nearly half an hour waiting for (to take) a taxi, as they were all busy (but none was empty). At last, I changed buses three times (three buses) to get to school. There's no doubt that (,) I was late for the graduation photo callWhat was (What's) worse, I found the whole class had been (was) waiting for me (to take graduation photos) for an hour. After learning of (knowing) my experience, they didn't blame me, but I still felt so sorry.
Although it happened (had happened for)two years ago, whenever I see the unforgettable photo, I always think of this late experience. Now, every day, I'm more careful with my time management (for every detail in my daily life).

6 września 2013
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