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My dream I had a dream tonight. It was really, really weird. I was sitting in the chair of a vapor train wagon. I stared looking at the window, and the sky was completly red. Suddenly I realised somethin brigghtful up there, just like a shooting star that becames bigger bigger and it´s going to crash on the land. The train stops, and all the passenger go to see what was happened. When we reach the point where the star landed, we discover a man sleeping. He got his arms around his legs and he is sleeping or unconscius. Few minutes later, the place we thought it was a crater, becomes a giant ant´s nest, and a lot of this giant insects starts picking up all of us violently to the underground. Once inside the ant´s nest, all was completly dark, and I only could see strange shadows with a very loud noise. That was too creepy for me, so I woke up a little bit scared. Am I mad, Doctor? :-)

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My dream

I had a dream tonight. It was really, really weird.

I was sitting in the chair of a vapor train wagon. I stared looking was staring at the window, and the sky was completly red. Suddenly I realised there was something brigghtful bright up there, just like a shooting star that becomes bigger and bigger and it´s is going to crash on into the land.

The train stops, and all the passengers go to see what was has happened. When we reach to the point where the star has landed, we discover a man sleeping. He got has his arms wrapped around his legs and he is sleeping or unconscius either sleeps or is unconscious.

A few minutes later, the place we thought it was a crater, becomes a giant ant´s nest, and a lot of this these giant insects starts picking up all of us violently to the underground.

Once inside the ant´s nest, all was completly dark, and I only could see strange shadows with a very loud noise.

That was too creepy for me, so I woke up a little bit scared.

Am I mad, Doctor? :-)

 

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