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Roaming the Streets (Optional: Capitalize important words in titles)
Today is Chinese New Year. When I parted with my friends, it was already 6 o'clock already. and the buses had stopped running at that time. There wasn't even no a single taxi on the street. So I had to go walk the whole way home on foot. Luckily, my home is not far away from downtown and it usually takes me only about 20 minutes to go home. (Just style changes, hope I didn't change your meaning too much)
When I was walking on the halfway halfway home, I started to play songs by Fun. It reminded me how I love wondering wandering around at night. There were not too many people about and everything nearby was so tranquil. I really fancy a phenomenon love when it is like this. The song Carry On is a perfect song especially when for walking on the streets. I remember the MV music video clearly where the band pursues their dreams on the street. It also reminds me of this that one night, my friends and I were singing Everybody and twisting our bodies after we leaving left the concert held by the Backstreet Boys. I still remember the lyrics,"Everybody, rock your body." That's a really fantastic song. We were knid kind of crazy then that night after drinking some beer. We just kept singing and dancing as if there were nobody around. ( Actually there were only two or three persons people on the street).
That's a good time in my mind book. (This last correction is optional. The phrase "--- in my book" is a way of say "in my opinion" or "by my standards." Sounds a bit more natural than "in my mind" is some contexts.)
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