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A university education is necessary for success in today's world.(Agree or disagree for toefl)
The issue of whether a university education is necessary for success in modern word is a debatable one. On the one hand, most of people study at inuversities universities and believe that it will help them in the future to get a well-paid job. On the other hand, there are a lot of people who have not got a degree, but they are successful. However, in the final analysis, I think that a person can reach succees without university education.
One reason is that supports of my thinking is that people can study themselves. They do not need to go to the university and waste their time on boring subjects. Then people have more time for self-education, For instance, they can read many useful books and go to the attend interesting courses.
Another reason is that nowadays we have to learn old(out-date?) outdated information, which is not used in todays world. All around us changes every second, that's why it is hard to be up-to-date. According to this, it would be better to read new books, to watch actual programs and to go to the attend different courses, which are based on modern needs.
Perhaps the main reason is a possibility to concentrate on the one thing that interested interests you more than others. There are many subjects at university and, for example, if you study marketing, you have to learn history and higher maths. These ones take too much time and you don't have not enough time for to improveing your marketing skills. Thus, it is difficult to reach success studying at the university where you have to learn a lot of studies. subjects
For the above reasons, I therefore conclude that it is not necessary to get university education for being to be successful, because the success comes to whose who believe and try to reach it.
A university education is necessary for success in today's world.(Agree or disagree for toefl)
The issue of whether a university education is necessary for success in modern word is a debatable one. On the one hand, most of people study at universities and believe that it will help them in the future to get a well-paid job. On the other hand, there are a lot of people who have not got a degree, but they are seccessful. However, in the final analisis, I think that a person can reach succees without university edication.
One reason is support of my thinking is that people can study themself. They do not need to go to the university and waste their time on boring subjects. Then people have more time for self-education, For instance, they can read many useful books and go to the interesting courses.
Another reason is that nowadays we have to learn old(out-date?) information, which is not use in today's world. All around us changes every second, that's why it is hard to be up-to-date. According to this, it would be better to read new books, to watch actual programs and to go to the different courses, which are based on modern needs.
Perhaps the main reason is a possibility to concentrate on the one thing that interested you more than others. There are many subjects at university and, for example, if you study marketing, you have to learn history and higher maths. These ones take too much time and you have not enough time for improving your marketing skills. Thus, it is difficult to reach success studing at the university where you have to learn a lot of studies.
For the above reasons, I therefore conclude that it is not necessary to get university edication for being succeesful, because the success comes to whose who believe and try to reach it.
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