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Some people say that older people should live with their adult children...... [Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Others say that they shouldn't. Which do you think is good practice] ----begin---- Nowadays, more and more older people face dilemma of whether they should live with their adult children. In my opinion, adults ought to take care of their aging parents and live with them. On the one hand, adult children can help their parents. Definitely, aging people would confront some difficulties in their daily lives sometimes .Older people need help in various things, such as to lift heavy things, to do some hard calculations, to control some new technical objects, and so on. Young people are good at these kinds of things. For instance, my mother bought a new android phone and she told me that she could not use it easily because she cannot find how to enlarge the font size of the phone. And she is afraid of asking the young people to help her because she does not want to leak her personal information which in her new cell phone. At last, i spent two hours more to help my mother to adjust her new phone through a telephone call only because I do not live with her. One the other hand, older people can also help their adult children. For example, under some circumstances, older people may take advantage of their experience to help their children, especially when their son or daughter meet some problem and need one to help them put the fire out. In sum, it is a good idea that the adult children and their parents live together. During the childhood, a man was looked after by his parents and when he grown up he should take care of his parents and live with his parents unless his parents do not want to live with him. ----end----
1 kwi 2014 13:54
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Some people say that older people seniors should live with their adult children......

[Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Others say that they shouldn't. Which do you think is good practice?]

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Nowadays, more and more older people there many seniors face the dilemma of whether if they should live with their adult children. In my opinion, adults one ought to take care of their aging parents and live with them.

On the one hand, adult children can help their parents. Definitely, aging people would seniors will face confront some difficulties in their daily lives such as unable to lift heavy things; limited mobility or even know how to handle modern electronic gadgets that we the young takes for granted. sometimes .Older people need help in various things, such as to lift heavy things, to do some hard calculations, to control some new technical objects, and so on. Young people are good at these kinds of things. For instance, my mother bought a new android phone and she told me that she could not use it easily because she cannot find how to enlarge the font size of the phone. And This is because she is afraid of to asking the young people to help from others her because she does not want to as she is afraid of leak her personal information compromised. which in her new cell phone. At last, I had to spend two hours more to help my mother to adjust her new phone through a by telephone call only because since I do not live with her.

One the other hand, older people can also help their adult children. For example, under some circumstances, older people may take advantage of their experience to help their children, especially when their son or daughter meet some problem and need one to help them put the fire out. they have the experience and expertise on life to help their adult children navigate through problems of life.  They have eaten more salt than the grains of rice their children had eaten.  [You can use Chinese sayings to booster your argument since even those who does not know Chinese culture will get the drift of things.]

In sum, it is a good idea that the adult children and their parents live together. During the childhood, a man was looked after by his parents and when he grown up he should take care of his parents and live with his parents unless his parents do not want to live with him. Long winded.

 

There is a Chinese saying which neatly sums up my opinion on this subject.  "I take care of you when you are young and you take care of me when I'm old".

 

 


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4 kwietnia 2014

Some people say that older people should live with their adult children......


One the other hand, the older generation people can also help their adult children. For example, under some circumstances, there are times when the experience of older people may take advantage of their experience to help will be helpful to their children, especially when their son or daughter meet some problem and need someone wise to help them put the fire out.

In summary, it is a good idea that for the adult children and their parents to live together. During the childhood,  man each of us was looked after by his our parents and when he we have grown up we should take care of his our parents and live with his parents them unless his parents they do not want to live with us him.
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14 czerwca 2014

lSome people say that older people should live with their adult children......

[Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Others say that they shouldn't. Which do you think is good practice]

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Nowadays, more and more older-age people face the dilemma (a <em>dilemma should have two parts - this or that)</em> of whether they should live with their adult children. In my opinion, adults ought to take care of their aging parents and live with them.

On the one hand, adult children can help their parents. Definitely, aging people would are sometimes confronted with some difficulties in their daily lives <em>(p</em><em>ut</em><em> the adverb near its related verb) </em>sometimes .Older people need help in various things, such as to for/when lifting heavy things, to doing some hard calculations, to control some using new technology objects, and so on <em> (you</em><em> </em><em>already</em><em> said such as so dont double ip with so on ).</em> Young people are good at these kinds of such things. For instance, my mother bought a new android phone and she told me that she could not use it easily because she cannot find how to enlarge increase the font size of the phone, and she is afraid of asking the young people to help her because she does not want to leak her personal information which is in her new cell phone. At last, On this occasion I spent more than two hours more to helping my mother to adjust her new phone through via a telephone call only simply because I do not live with her.
 to be continued, two parts...
In sum, it is a good idea that the adult children and their parents live together. During the childhood, a man was looked after by his parents and when he grown up he should take care of his parents and live with his parents unless his parents do not want to live with him.
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14 czerwca 2014
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