Sam
My hometown-1 environment My hometown is a small town in southwest of China. In recently years, government had built a big hydroelectric power station here, which has a big dam, and makes a big lake here. In coming years, we will build some recreation facility and hotel here, so my hometown will be a good place to have a weekend vacation for urban people around.
16 kwi 2014 03:12
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My hometown-1 environment

 

My hometown is a small town in the southwest of China.
In recently years, the government has built a big hydroelectric power station here, which has a big dam , and creates a big lake. here In coming years, we will build some recreational facilities and hotels here, so my hometown will become a good place to have a weekend trip [or: weekend getaway] for urban people around city dwellers who live nearby.

 

Good job!

17 kwietnia 2014
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My hometown-1 environment

My hometown is a small town in the southwest of China.
In recently years, the government has built a big hydroelectric power station here, which has a big dam, and so has makes made a big lake. here. In coming years, the near future we will build some recreation facilities and hotels here, so my hometown will be a good place for urban people (or "city dwellers") to have a weekend vacation for urban people around.

17 kwietnia 2014
Why nobody help me to correct my note?
17 kwietnia 2014
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