shan
A freshman is come here Hello ,everybody My name is shan ,I am a freshman in the italki, I really look forward to finding new friends ,teachers. help others and improve my language skill..let 's work hard,make friends and have fun.
21 kwi 2014 12:13
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A freshman is come here has arrived

Hello ,everybody. My name is Shan and  I am a freshman in on the italki., I really look forward to finding new friends and teachers. help others and to improve my language skill.. Let 's work hard, make friends and have fun.

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21 kwietnia 2014

A freshman has come here!

Hello everybody,

My name is shan. I am new on the italki. I really look forward to finding new friends, finding new teachers, helping others and improving my language skills. Let 's work hard, make friends and have fun.

21 kwietnia 2014
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