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To: the school library
From: Julia
Subject: Book recommendation- Looking for Alibrandi
Introduction
This report is intended (to) get you to buying a very interesting book. Last week I went shopping and in a book shop window I saw this book- Looking for Alibrandi.
Current situation
So I read through two pages in the shop only- but I really like(d) the way they are written. There are many different words and in this part of the book there is a lot of direct speech. You also get a lot of information about the characters and about the way they are thinking about some topics and the world.
But what will happen next? Maybe Josie Alibrandi, the main character will fall in love with Jacob Coote.
Several consulted pupils ("students" instead of pupils is more common) have only seen the film yet and would like to read the book.
Suggestions
So I think it would be a good idea to buy this book for our school library so that interested students (me included) are able to read this book for free. To sum up I also think that if there were to be more modern books in the library, pupils would get more interested in reading, plus, as they don’t have to spend their money on books in order to read them.
i think there are many mistakes.. it would be great if someone could look at it.. :)
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