Bad morning
It rained heavily today,I went out of home for school with a unbrella at half past seven pm.just not far from home,I felt one of my shoes was wet by water.the feeling really bad and the water kept going into my shoe,when I got bus station half of one of my shoes was wet.
after get into bus and reach my school and go up to the school gate I just found that my school ID card was left at home,the guard did not let me into school,I had to call my teacher and prove I was the school's student,after that I got into school,then I just hoped everyting will be good in the remain of the day.
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Bad morning
It rained heavily today. I left my home and headed for to school with an umbrella at half past seven AM.just Not far from home, I felt one of my shoes was felt wet. by water It felt really bad and the water kept going into my shoe. (By the time I reached/ When I arrived at ) when I got the bus station half of one of my shoes was wet.
After get into taking the bus, reaching my school and go up to approaching the school gate I just found realized that I had forgotten my school ID card left at home. The guard did would not let me into the school, so I had to call my teacher to prove I was the school's student. After that I finally got into my school, then I just and kept hoping that everyting will would go well be good in for the remainder of the day.
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